Best of the semester-1

 I am in favor of wearing uniforms to school for several reasons.  First, if people wear their own clothes instead of wearing uniforms, it may looks more disorder.  Next, we don’t have to worry about what we should wear because we have to wear uniforms every day.  Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize. That is to say, if someone do something bad, the police will recognize him or her by uniforms right away.  To sum up, I think wearing uniforms is a good memory for student time because when we become college students, we have no uniforms to wear generally. 

Discussing effects-1(revised)

Acton is a small town in the Midwest which has a population of 2,500.  It is a safe, quiet, and clean place to live. However, Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory in Acton.  Although this thing may be regarded as a good thing; actually, there will be many negative effects on Action .  With the new large factory constructed, pollution problems will be from bad to worse, such as air pollution and environmental problems.  Next, owing to the construction of the new large factory, there will be more and more people move in.  This way, street will be filled with rubbish.  Besides, once people move in increasingly, the small town will become crowded and noisy.  What is worse, public security will be severe.  To sum up, it’s a controversial issue to regard this construction as a bad thing.

Discussing effects-2(revised)

Coming to America is an important decision to me.  Also, it has great effects on me.  At first, my English was poor and I couldn’t make conversation with foreigners!  After coming to America for three years, I have made great progress in my English skills such as reading and speaking.  To my surprise, I am not afraid of talking to foreigners now.   There, I even made foreign friends and sometimes went out with them.  Most important of all , I have learn some American cultures which are different from Taiwanese.  When I returned Taiwan, I find that I have more chances to get a job because I am good at English now.  With these good effects, I think it is a wonderful experience to me.

Discussing Cause-2(revised)

There are many reasons why I accept this job.  First of all, the environment of the workplace is ideal for me: tidy, quiet and simple.  Next, one of my good friends also works here; this way, I will not feel lonely because I am a shy person.  Next, the salary is attractive and acceptable.  Most important of all, this job is about English translation and I major in English; therefore, I can do it well.  I hope I can familiarize myself into work soon!  

Discussing Cause-1(revised)

The business failed for several reasons.  First, there are two large music stores near this store, in this way, the competitiveness force would be intense.  Second, most of the CDs in this store were hip-hop and rock; they were not only too simple but too unappealing.  It should have had more selections for people who have different interests in music.  Next, the business hours were too short.  Besides, people usually take a nap or have no time to go outside during this time, so this is the reason why the business hours were inappropriate.  Finally, Mr. Williams accepts neither checks nor credit cards.  It was really unhandy for people.  According to these above, I think they were the main reasons why the business failed

Express an opinion-2(revised)

  I am in favor of wearing uniforms to school for several reasons.  First, if people wear their own clothes instead of wearing uniforms, it may looks more disorder.  Next, we don’t have to worry about what we should wear because we have to wear uniforms every day.  Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize.This way, if they do something bad, the police could know who they are right away.  To sum up, I think wearing uniforms is a good memory for student time because when we become college students, we have no uniforms to wear generally. 

Express an opinion-1(revised)

  In my opinion, using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment is right.  First of all, those felonries who commit serious crimes must pay for it.  Second, if we ignore their misbehavior, those who sacrifice themselves will prove to be in vain.  Next, we must let everyone know that doing something bad is definitely wrong.  Not only will we punish severely but we also value the human rights.  Finally, I hope we learn a lesson from those tragedies.