Discussing Cause-1(revised)

The business failed for several reasons.  First, there are two large music stores near this store, in this way, the competitiveness force would be intense.  Second, most of the CDs in this store were hip-hop and rock; they were not only too simple but too unappealing.  It should have had more selections for people who have different interests in music.  Next, the business hours were too short.  Besides, people usually take a nap or have no time to go outside during this time, so this is the reason why the business hours were inappropriate.  Finally, Mr. Williams accepts neither checks nor credit cards.  It was really unhandy for people.  According to these above, I think they were the main reasons why the business failed