Discussing effects-2(revised)

Coming to America is an important decision to me.  Also, it has great effects on me.  At first, my English was poor and I couldn’t make conversation with foreigners!  After coming to America for three years, I have made great progress in my English skills such as reading and speaking.  To my surprise, I am not afraid of talking to foreigners now.   There, I even made foreign friends and sometimes went out with them.  Most important of all , I have learn some American cultures which are different from Taiwanese.  When I returned Taiwan, I find that I have more chances to get a job because I am good at English now.  With these good effects, I think it is a wonderful experience to me.