Comparing 1(revised)

Compared to these two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, the greatest persons in the U.S history, they have many differenances.  First, both of them played an important role in American Revolution.  Second,  they delegated to the Continental Congress and studied or practiced law as well.  Next, Jonh Adams was a signer of Declaration of Independence and so was Thomas Jefferson.  Moreover, the date they died was the same-July 4,1826.
These two people are alike in many ways, perhaps there are something meaningful behind these coincidence.

Comparing 2(revised)

There is a driver's license which is similar to the other.  First of all, they are both women and both of their eye color is brown.  Futhermore, their hair color is black.  As to the height, Stephanie Brooks is as tall as Ann Friedman because they are all 5 feet and 3 inches.   Finally,  birth of their birthdays are July 31, 1981.  That is to say, they are at the same age.  I think it's amazing that they are similar to each other.  If they know this, they may be surprised!

Express an opinion-2

  I am in favor of wearing uniforms to school for several reasons.  First, if people  wear their own clothes instead of wearing uniforms, it may looks more disorder.  Next, we don’t have to worry about what we should wear because we have to wear uniforms every day.  Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize.  To sum up, I think wear uniforms is a good memory for student time because when we become college students, we have no uniforms to wear generally. 

Express an opinion-1

  In my opinion, using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment is right.  First of all, those felonries who commit serious crimes must pay for it.  Second, if we let alone their misbehavior, those who sacrifice themselves will prove to be in vain.  Next, we must let everyone know that doing something bad is definitely wrong.  Not only will we punish severely but we also value the human rights.  Finally, I hope we learn a lesson from those tragedies.

Contrasting-2

I would choose Debra to be an English instructor in my school for several reasons.  First,  Debra has more educations than Lynn.  Next, compared to Lynn, Debra's employment experiences are more than Lynn's.  Third,  Debra had a publishing company which is called Shortman in 2006. Although Lynn is fluent in many languages, but the one my school needs is a ''English'' instrusctor.  Due to Debra's experiences,  I think she is the best person that we want!

Contrasting-1

My parents take me to find a house because I am going to be a college student.  But now, we face a problem-to choose one of these two houses.  First, Fairfax Apartments has two large bedrooms; however, the CAMPUS APTS has only one large room.  Different from Fairfax Apartments, CAMPUS APTS allows pets and this is a big temptation to me. Next, if I rents Fairfax, it will costs me $1250 per month.  On the other hand,  if I choose the other one, I have to spend $900 per month. Most important of all, Fairfax Apartments has all utilities and it will makes me easier to perpare the articles for daily use.   It's really a hard choice to me.  I think I will choose Fairfax Apartments finally because of its high quality although it is more expensive than CAMPUS APTS.

Comparing-3

I have been to two great restaurants-Star restaurant and Hello restaurant, and I notice that there are many parts of them are alike.  First, both of these two restaurants are in high qualities.  Second,  Star restaurant's service is as good as the other one.  Moreover, the neat and tidy environment of Star restaurant is similar to that of Hello restaurant.  Most important of all, Hello restaurant's waiters are really nice and polite.
Likewise,  Star restaurant's waiters are great, too!  Owing to these outstanding conditions of restaurants,  I enjoy the atmosphere there very much when I have meals.