I am in favor of wearing uniforms to school for several reasons. First, if people wear their own clothes instead of wearing uniforms, it may looks more disorder. Next, we don’t have to worry about what we should wear because we have to wear uniforms every day. Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize. To sum up, I think wear uniforms is a good memory for student time because when we become college students, we have no uniforms to wear generally.
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I think wear uniforms~. wear要加ing喔
回覆刪除Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize.容易被認出是哪間學校的這個論點不太夠力~要加附加小點說明喔!
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