Compared to these two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, the greatest persons in the U.S history.
First, both of them played an important role in American Revolution. Second, they delegated to the Continental Congress and studied or practiced law as well. Next, Jonh Adams was a signer of Declaration of Independence and so was Thomas Jefferson. Moreover, the date they died was the same-July 4,1826.
These two people are alike in many ways, perhaps there are something meaningful behind these coincidence.
Compared to 這個句子要有主要子句和附屬子句唷!
回覆刪除the greatest persons in the U.S history.只是作為John Adams and Thomas Jefferson的修飾語而不是附屬句子
舉例來說:Compared to these two men, the former is younger than the latter.
(不知道這樣講妳聽不聽的懂...><)
我懂!我懂上面那個人講的!!
回覆刪除第一句的確怪怪的~然後the greatest是最高級，所以應該不能用在兩個人之間吧((我不太了解))
Second, they delegated to the Continental Congress and studied or practiced law as well.(應該寫成 A as well as B were...)
Compared to these two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, the greatest persons in the U.S history.
回覆刪除這樣句子不完整,要有動詞
上面靜諦有舉例了,所以就不多說了~!
Compared to these two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, the greatest persons in the U.S history.我跟靜諦的想法一樣，你的句子還沒寫完喲!
回覆刪除我還漫喜歡你的結尾句!
Compared to these two men~這句真的怪怪的
回覆刪除Compared to these two men~ 靜諦的想法+1
回覆刪除結論句很讚喔!
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