2011年4月20日 星期三
My Favorite Holiday
Christmas is my favorite hoilday and I have several reasons for why I like it. To begin wuth, when Christmas is coming, many stores are decorated by many patterns which are associated with Christmas. Next, there are many pleasant scenery such as Poinsettias and light bulbs along the street. Third, my friends and I will write cards and give gifts to each other for celebrating Christmas. But the main reason for me is that many kids believe the existance of Santa Claus so they put their socks beside their beds and wait for him. I think it is really cute for kids to do so because after we grow up we no longer do this kind of thing. As a result, I hope I still can keep this cute imagination even if I become an adult.
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To begin wuth (with)
回覆刪除然後結論句我覺得有點怪怪的!!
with打錯囉!
回覆刪除另外
I have several reasons for why I like it.
這句我不確定for和why可不可以同時出現....
麻煩你查一下...
第一句應該是for which不是for why唷~~~
回覆刪除還有拼錯的with~~~
wuth→with
回覆刪除after we grow up we no longer do this kind of thing
中間應該要有逗號唷!
結尾可以再更好一點..
有錯的地方大家都講完囉~
回覆刪除喜歡聖誕節時彷彿像小孩一樣純真這個想法很棒呢!!!
結論句要不要改成什麼現在還會裝飾啊之類的跟HANNA一樣首尾呼應嗎哈哈
回覆刪除補充一下...標題的Hoilday拼錯了XD"
回覆刪除大家都把問題打出來了!那我就不打了喔!
回覆刪除寫的文章有種純真可愛的感覺喔!
Good~
第二行wuth改with
回覆刪除I have several reasons for why I like it)是不是要刪掉for