Reducing stress is an important lesson to modern people. Every day, we meet every kinds of tough problems to make us feel stressed, so we all have all manner of ways to reduce stress. First of all, you should threw away the matter which bothers you. Second, you may take a walk or take a deep breath to change your mood. Moreover, you can write down all of your complaints in your diary. If these steps are not enough to you, you can yell in the bathroom or hit your pillow! Most important of all, when you feel better, you have to face the music instead of escaping the reality.
or hit your pillow! hit前面要不要加個even呢?
回覆刪除threw→throw
回覆刪除其他都還蠻不錯的!!
every+單數!
回覆刪除寫的不錯!!
就以上說的然後...
回覆刪除倒數第二段後面when you feel better
when改成after會不會比較好???
比較有時間先後順序的感覺:D
every 後面要加單數喔!!
回覆刪除enough 後面如果加名詞,要換成for!!
為什麼當我感覺好一點時,要勇敢面對困難阿!??
1.every kinds of tough problems 把every改成different會不會比較好~?
回覆刪除2.threw 是原形喔!!!
3.結論句~讚~+1
all have all manner of ~~要不要把前面的ALL的作替換會比較通順
回覆刪除問題大家大致都講完了:D
回覆刪除最後一句寫得很好喔~~