2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing-2
There is a driver's license which is similar to another. First of all, they are all women and both of their eye color is brown. Futhermore, they have black hair color. As to the height, Stephanie Brooks is as tall as Ann Friedman because they are all 5 feet and 3 inches. Finally, the date of birth of these two women is July 31, 1981. That is to say, they are at the same age. I think it's amazing that they are similar to each other. If they know this, they may be surprised!
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all是用於三者或以上唷!
回覆刪除字辭用得很好呢~有些我想不到可以這樣寫:)
they are all women
回覆刪除all→both
結論句蠻不錯的^__^
There is a driver's license which is similar to another. (another 改成the other)
回覆刪除all(是用在三者以上喔)
the date of birth (覺得有點怪怪的!要不要直接改成their birthday)
恩..they have black hair color.寫成their hair color are black會不會比較ok 呢?
回覆刪除我覺得你寫的很好!
我覺得連接詞很好
回覆刪除寫的很棒:)
all是三個人喔 改both吧
回覆刪除整體蠻流暢的而且很不錯喔
As to the height, Stephanie Brooks is as tall as Ann Friedman because they are all 5 feet and 3 inches.我覺得because怪怪的~要不要說他們身高一樣，都是5 feet and 3 inches
回覆刪除除此之外都寫的很好喔!