Future-perspective

   If I can be admitted to National Taiwan University of Science and Technology, I would like to choose Applied of Foreign Language Department as my major.  In my first year in college, I will improve my speaking skills as well as listening, which are imperative when I have chance to talk to foreigners.  Although I have practiced a lot in my senior high days, I don’t think I am good enough.  The only way that I can promote my English ability is go on studying.  I will force myself to chat with my friends in English.  Besides English, I also want to learn French, because I think it sounds graceful when speaking French. 

Next year, I want to learn preliminary simultaneous translation.  It’s a critical section in learning English. 

In my third year, I want to go abroad to learn foreign life, perhaps in America or in France.  Except learning genuine accent, I am eager to experience different life to rich my living experience and I will take part-time job, too. 

In final year, I will be devoted to studying and go to a graduate school.  In the future, I want to be an English teacher or a translator or a traveler to travel around the world.

Self-evaluation

As to my personalities, I am a positive and easygoing girl.  Every time when I meet the difficulties, I will face them without escaping them.  For example, I once didn’t pass the intermediate level of GEPT.  Instead of giving up, I asked my classmates how to improve my speaking skills.  Also, I read English articles loudly every night and imitate foreigner’s accent.  Eventually, I pass the test!  Also, my positive attitude has a great influence on my life.  One day, my clothes missed on the road to school, my reaction to this thing is laughing loudly without being sad.  I always look on the bright side of life and I think that life won’t be too terrible even if something bad happens.  Besides, during past three years, my English ability has improved a lot no matter the speaking skills or writing.  I have licenses about English ability such as GEPT tests(elementary level and intermediate level)、English typing.  I also attended English camp last summer vocation.  In there, I have learned how to produce a commercial briefing in English.  To me, leaterning English is not only for getting high scores, but a way to accumulate knowledge.  I never feel tired learning it!

School life- revised

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS).  I love English so much that I chose this subject as my major.  In this class, I learn so many from my classmates and they are so nice to me.  In past two years, we have got so many prizes.  I am really proud of my class and enjoy the time we get together. 

When I was a freshman, I had no idea what to do in the future.  I followed my teacher’s instruction step by step.  I read English magazines and listened to the radio. Finally, passed the General English Proficiency Test and passed the elementary level.  After that, I firmly believed that as long as I word hard, I will succeed one day. 

When I was a second grade student, I was devoted to improving my English oral ability to pass the GEPT intermediate level. Knowing I was poor in speaking, I read the English articles loudly every night. Besides, I asked my classmates how to speak English fluently.  After few months later, I passed the test eventually.  By the way, I served as the class treasurer for half a year.  I learned how to manage money carefully and take the responsibility.

Until now, I still work hard on my English.  Maybe I will take part in the GEPT high-intermediate level.

As to my extracurricular activity, I play volleyball with classmates after school.  Trough this activity, I meet many friends from different classes.  I really fall in love with playing volleyball and I even go to school to play volleyball on Saturday.

During three years, I learn a lot from my classmates and teachers.  I become mature and considerate of everything.

Family backgroung-revised

My name is Sih-Chi Huang.  I have five members in my family.  My father is a kind and gentle man.  He always says “We can’t be too greedy for anything” and “No matter what you are doing, just do your best!” Because of his words, when I meet difficult positions, I always think of his words to comfort myself, and as a student, I do everything with my efforts.  My mother is a woman who has sympathy; she is not only my mother but also my good friend. Every time when I am sick, she will take good care of me without complaining. Also, when she is in a bad mood, she will tell me what is on her mind.  I am pleasure that I have a good relationship with two of them.  My brother is a graduate student.  As long as he comes back, he is concerned with my schoolwork and teaches me patiently.  My sister is a college student; she is the person who understands me most. We also share our secret with each other.  I am happy that I have such a good family!

School life

I am studying at Department of Applied Foreign Languages in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School (NTCVS).  I love English so much that I chose this subject as my major.  In this class, I learn so many from my classmates and they are so nice to me.  In past two years, we have got so many prizes.  I am really proud of my class and enjoy the time we get together. 

When I was a freshman, I had no idea what to do in the future.  I followed my teacher’s instruction step by step.  I read English magazines and listened to the radio. Finally, passed the General English Proficiency Test and passed the elementary level.  After that, I firmly believed that as long as I word hard, I will succeed one day. 

When I was a second grade student, I was devoted to improving my English oral ability to pass the GEPT intermediate level. Knowing I was poor in speaking, I read the English articles loudly every night. Besides, I asked my classmates how to speak English fluently.  After few months later, I passed the test eventually.  By the way, I served as the class treasurer for half a year.  I learned how to manage money carefully and take the responsibility.

Until now, I still word hard on my English.  Maybe I will take part in the GEPT high-intermediate level.

Family background

My name is Huang, Sih Chi.  I have four members in my family.  My father is a kind and gentle man.  He always says “We can’t be too greedy for anything” and “No matter what you are doing, just do your best!” Because of his words, when I meet difficult positions, I always think of his words to comfort myself. My mother is an empathy woman; she is not only my mother but also my good friend. Every time when I am sick, she will take good care of me without complaining. Also, when she is in a bad mood, she shares with me.  I am pleasure that I have a good relationship with two of them.  My brother is a graduate student.  As long as he comes back, he is concerned with my schoolwork and teaches me patiently.  My sister is a college student; she is the person who understands me most. We also share our secret with each other.  I am happy that I have such a good family!

autobiography-sample 2

I am Po-Wen Hsiao. Raphael is my english name. It is chosen because of my french name called Raphaël. Chia-yi is my hometown. There are four people in my family. My father works as a truck driver and my mother is a packer for a food ingredient shop. I also have a older sister who is now working as an assistant in Tainan. Luckily, I have a happy family with my parents open-minded and a sister who takes much care of me. My parents absolutely have great influence on me, and I always look up to them. Their optimism shows us the way to get over the difficulty, and they never force us to do things we do not want. My father often tells me “Getting involved learns more.” This is why I participate a lot in school activities and have the freedom to develop my hobbies. I graduated from OOXX University in Taipei. Throughout my school years, I am a active student joined many activities in French department and in the club of Chia-Yun, a club of reunion . Because of my passion to make friends, every time when I have the chance to be in charge of some activities held at school, I just do my best to accomplish all of them. My classmates and me had a group to work for edition of the journal of French department. To collect the photographs and design the pages formed me to have the sense of art. And my time in the club of reunion not only made me improve the ability of the communication and of the organization but also allowed me to be familiar with the management of an activity or a campaign. I spent my leisure time listening to music, especially the foreign rock music. On listening, I sing aloud with the lyrics which makes me get the meaning of the song. As my hobby, I increasingly develop my great interet in learning English, and it does help with my reading and writing. In addition, the hand-made cards is what I love to do. Designing cards not only makes me happy but also stimulates my sense of creation. With all these periods, I believe that we must achieve something from what we do in our lives. In the future, I desire to go deeply on language learning, and gain more work experience. Just like what I got from my participation of the cheerleading in college, the prize is not forever, but to learn and to share is the most valuable.

antobiography-sample 1

My name is Charlotte. I was born in Taipei and then moved to Kaohsiung. There are four members in my family, including the parents and an older sister. My parents are very busy and working hardly, so I am very independent.

The process of pursuing my studies, I have good relationships with classmates and communicate well with teachers. I’ve also been class officers many times.

In junior high, I’d been class officers sequentially, such as class constable and class secretary, etc. I’d also been English and History assistant teacher several times. Through the experiences of being class officers, not only strengthen the work and communication skills, also won praises from teachers.

In senior high, the school and the homeroom teacher are very open-minded; they encourage students to participate lots of activities joyously. On one occasion, there was a carnival in the school 8th anniversary. I was responsible for connecting with manufacturers and arranging the shift table. I’d been rejected many times during searching for the manufacturers, but after my ceaselessly effort. Finally, my sincerity struck a chord with a manufacturer. Due to get good along with the classmates, when I arranged the shift table, lots of them helped voluntarily. Even though the process was complicated, but after I communicated and coordinated patiently: in the end, I learned a lot about how to dealing with things and the attitude of working.

In the university, I entered the Department of Republic Relations of International Trade Student Council. I was responsible for asking the sponsorship of the surrounding stores, as well as the contact matters of various activities of the department. Since the relevant experience of senior high, let me deal with those skillfully. In the influence of my mother (the manager of insurance industry), I am interested with financial and choose the Department of Finance as my minor. I also get the License of the Securities Specialist and the Qualification of the Life Insurance Agent.

The summer vacation in 2008, for proving the English ability, I went to England to take English courses for 2 months. Living in a completely different culture and language environment from Taiwan, and the English I speak is American accent, the cultural shock I went through was strong. But I am open-minded and have good ability to adapt the new environment. Also my personality is very independent since I was young, so I was up to speed after few days. Through that tine, not only enhanced my self-confident and English communication skills, but broadened my horizons by getting along with foreign friends. During the English courses, I also have good relationships with the host family and still in touch now.

As a student of the Department of International Trade, the Department not merely has the professional courses, but provides foreign languages. According to my interests, I chose Spanish, French and Korean. In addition, I also do the enhancement of Spanish outside the school.

I hope sincerely to get the opportunity to apply what I learned from university to the practicality. I also wish to gain more practical experiences through working and contribute to company. I am willing to learn energetically to get on track immediately, and ask for advice from superintendents and colleagues humbly. I would like to use spare time to strengthen the working abilities and skills. Looking forward to hearing from you soon and hope to be given the opportunity to present my self at an interview.

Best of the semester-3

Reducing stress is an important lesson to modern people. Every day, we meet different kinds of tough problems to make us feel stressed, so we have a variety of ways to reduce stress.  First of all, you should throw away the matter which bothers you.  Second, you may take a walk or take a deep breath to change your mood.  Moreover, you can write down all of  your complaints in your diary.  If these steps are not enough for you, you can yell in the bathroom or even hit your pillow!  Most important of all, after you feel better, you have to face the music instead of escaping the reality.

Best of the semester-2

Acton is a small town in the Midwest which has a population of 2,500.  It is a safe, quiet, and clean place to live. However, Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory in Acton.  Although this thing may be regarded as a good thing; actually, there will be many negative effects on Action .  With the new large factory constructed, pollution problems will be from bad to worse, such as air pollution and environmental problems.  Next, owing to the construction of the new large factory, there will be more and more people move in.  This way, street will be filled with rubbish.  Besides, once people move in increasingly, the small town will become crowded and noisy.  What is worse, public security will be severe.  To sum up, it’s a controversial issue to regard this construction as a bad thing.

Best of the semester-1

 I am in favor of wearing uniforms to school for several reasons.  First, if people wear their own clothes instead of wearing uniforms, it may looks more disorder.  Next, we don’t have to worry about what we should wear because we have to wear uniforms every day.  Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize. That is to say, if someone do something bad, the police will recognize him or her by uniforms right away.  To sum up, I think wearing uniforms is a good memory for student time because when we become college students, we have no uniforms to wear generally. 

Discussing effects-1(revised)

Acton is a small town in the Midwest which has a population of 2,500.  It is a safe, quiet, and clean place to live. However, Stanley Manufacturing decides to open a large factory in Acton.  Although this thing may be regarded as a good thing; actually, there will be many negative effects on Action .  With the new large factory constructed, pollution problems will be from bad to worse, such as air pollution and environmental problems.  Next, owing to the construction of the new large factory, there will be more and more people move in.  This way, street will be filled with rubbish.  Besides, once people move in increasingly, the small town will become crowded and noisy.  What is worse, public security will be severe.  To sum up, it’s a controversial issue to regard this construction as a bad thing.

Discussing effects-2(revised)

Coming to America is an important decision to me.  Also, it has great effects on me.  At first, my English was poor and I couldn’t make conversation with foreigners!  After coming to America for three years, I have made great progress in my English skills such as reading and speaking.  To my surprise, I am not afraid of talking to foreigners now.   There, I even made foreign friends and sometimes went out with them.  Most important of all , I have learn some American cultures which are different from Taiwanese.  When I returned Taiwan, I find that I have more chances to get a job because I am good at English now.  With these good effects, I think it is a wonderful experience to me.

Discussing Cause-2(revised)

There are many reasons why I accept this job.  First of all, the environment of the workplace is ideal for me: tidy, quiet and simple.  Next, one of my good friends also works here; this way, I will not feel lonely because I am a shy person.  Next, the salary is attractive and acceptable.  Most important of all, this job is about English translation and I major in English; therefore, I can do it well.  I hope I can familiarize myself into work soon!  

Discussing Cause-1(revised)

The business failed for several reasons.  First, there are two large music stores near this store, in this way, the competitiveness force would be intense.  Second, most of the CDs in this store were hip-hop and rock; they were not only too simple but too unappealing.  It should have had more selections for people who have different interests in music.  Next, the business hours were too short.  Besides, people usually take a nap or have no time to go outside during this time, so this is the reason why the business hours were inappropriate.  Finally, Mr. Williams accepts neither checks nor credit cards.  It was really unhandy for people.  According to these above, I think they were the main reasons why the business failed

Express an opinion-2(revised)

  I am in favor of wearing uniforms to school for several reasons.  First, if people wear their own clothes instead of wearing uniforms, it may looks more disorder.  Next, we don’t have to worry about what we should wear because we have to wear uniforms every day.  Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize.This way, if they do something bad, the police could know who they are right away.  To sum up, I think wearing uniforms is a good memory for student time because when we become college students, we have no uniforms to wear generally. 

Express an opinion-1(revised)

  In my opinion, using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment is right.  First of all, those felonries who commit serious crimes must pay for it.  Second, if we ignore their misbehavior, those who sacrifice themselves will prove to be in vain.  Next, we must let everyone know that doing something bad is definitely wrong.  Not only will we punish severely but we also value the human rights.  Finally, I hope we learn a lesson from those tragedies.

Discussing effects- 2

  Coming to an English-speaking country is an important decision to me.  Also, it has great effects on me.  At first, my English was poor and I couldn’t make conversation with foreigners!  After I came to an English-speaking country, I made great progress in my English skills such as reading and speaking.  To my surprise, I am not afraid of talking to foreigners now.  In there, I even made foreign friends and sometimes went out with them.  When I returned my original country, I find that I have more chances to get a job because I am good at English now.  With these good effects, I think it is a wonderful experience to me.

Discussing effects-1

The new large factory has many negative effects on Action town.  With the new large factory constructed, pollution problems become more and more serious, such as air pollution and environmental problems.  Next, owing to the construction of new large factory, there will be more and more people move in.  This way, street will be filled with rubbish.  Besides, once there are more and more people move in, the small town will become crowned and noisy.  What is worse, public security will be severe.  To sum up, it’s a controversial issue to regard this construction as a bad thing.

My Favorite Holiday (revised)

Christmas is my favorite hoilday and I have several reasons for which I like it.  To begin with, when Christmas is coming, many stores are decorated by many patterns which are associated with Christmas.  Next, there are many pleasant scenery such as Poinsettias and light bulbs along the street.  Third, my friends and I will write cards and give gifts to each other for celebrating Christmas.  But the main reason for me is that many kids believe the existance of Santa Claus so they put their socks beside their beds and wait for him.  I think it is really cute for kids to do so because after we grow up, we no longer do this kind of thing.  As a result, I hope I still can keep this cute imagination even if I become an adult.

comparing-3(revised)

I have been to two great restaurants-Star restaurant and Hello restaurant, and I notice that there are many parts of them alike.  First, both of these two restaurants are in high qualities.  Second,  Star restaurant's service is as good as the other one.  Moreover, the neat and tidy environment of Star restaurant is similar to that of Hello restaurant.  Most important of all, Hello restaurant's waiters are really nice and polite.
Likewise,  Star restaurant's waiters are great. Owing to these outstanding conditions of restaurants,  I enjoy the atmosphere there very much when I have meals.

Contrasting-2(revised)

I would choose Debra as an English instructor in my school for several reasons.  First,  Debra is more professional than Lynn in education.  Next, compared to Lynn's employment experience, Debra has much experience than Lynn.  Third,  Debra published a book which is called English Verb Tenses  in 2006. Although Lynn is fluent in many languages, but the one my school needs is a ''English'' instrusctor.  Due to Debra's experiences,  I think she is the best person that we want!

Discussing Cause-2

There are many reasons why I accept this job.  First of all, the environment of the workplace is ideal for me: tidy, quiet and simple.  Next, one of my good friends also works here; this way, I will not feel lonely because I am a freshman here.  Next, the salary is attractive and acceptable.  Most important of all, this job is about English translation and I’m major in English.  I hope I can familiar myself into work soon!  

Discussing Cause-1

The business failed for several reasons.  First, there are two large music stores near this store, in this way, the competitiveness would be intense.  Second, most of the CDs in this store were hip-hop and rock; it was not only too simple but too unappealing.  They should have had more selections for people who have different interests in music.  Next, the business hours were too short.  Besides, people usually take a nap or have no time to go outside during this time, so this is the reason why the business hours were inappropriate.  Finally, Mr. Williams accept neither checks nor credit cards.  It was really unhandy for people.  According to the above, I think they were the main reasons of the business failed.

Comparing 1(revised)

Compared to these two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, the greatest persons in the U.S history, they have many differenances.  First, both of them played an important role in American Revolution.  Second,  they delegated to the Continental Congress and studied or practiced law as well.  Next, Jonh Adams was a signer of Declaration of Independence and so was Thomas Jefferson.  Moreover, the date they died was the same-July 4,1826.
These two people are alike in many ways, perhaps there are something meaningful behind these coincidence.

Comparing 2(revised)

There is a driver's license which is similar to the other.  First of all, they are both women and both of their eye color is brown.  Futhermore, their hair color is black.  As to the height, Stephanie Brooks is as tall as Ann Friedman because they are all 5 feet and 3 inches.   Finally,  birth of their birthdays are July 31, 1981.  That is to say, they are at the same age.  I think it's amazing that they are similar to each other.  If they know this, they may be surprised!

Express an opinion-2

  I am in favor of wearing uniforms to school for several reasons.  First, if people  wear their own clothes instead of wearing uniforms, it may looks more disorder.  Next, we don’t have to worry about what we should wear because we have to wear uniforms every day.  Next, when student wear uniforms, they stand for their own schools, which is easy to recognize.  To sum up, I think wear uniforms is a good memory for student time because when we become college students, we have no uniforms to wear generally. 

Express an opinion-1

  In my opinion, using the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment is right.  First of all, those felonries who commit serious crimes must pay for it.  Second, if we let alone their misbehavior, those who sacrifice themselves will prove to be in vain.  Next, we must let everyone know that doing something bad is definitely wrong.  Not only will we punish severely but we also value the human rights.  Finally, I hope we learn a lesson from those tragedies.

Contrasting-2

I would choose Debra to be an English instructor in my school for several reasons.  First,  Debra has more educations than Lynn.  Next, compared to Lynn, Debra's employment experiences are more than Lynn's.  Third,  Debra had a publishing company which is called Shortman in 2006. Although Lynn is fluent in many languages, but the one my school needs is a ''English'' instrusctor.  Due to Debra's experiences,  I think she is the best person that we want!

Contrasting-1

My parents take me to find a house because I am going to be a college student.  But now, we face a problem-to choose one of these two houses.  First, Fairfax Apartments has two large bedrooms; however, the CAMPUS APTS has only one large room.  Different from Fairfax Apartments, CAMPUS APTS allows pets and this is a big temptation to me. Next, if I rents Fairfax, it will costs me $1250 per month.  On the other hand,  if I choose the other one, I have to spend $900 per month. Most important of all, Fairfax Apartments has all utilities and it will makes me easier to perpare the articles for daily use.   It's really a hard choice to me.  I think I will choose Fairfax Apartments finally because of its high quality although it is more expensive than CAMPUS APTS.

Comparing-3

I have been to two great restaurants-Star restaurant and Hello restaurant, and I notice that there are many parts of them are alike.  First, both of these two restaurants are in high qualities.  Second,  Star restaurant's service is as good as the other one.  Moreover, the neat and tidy environment of Star restaurant is similar to that of Hello restaurant.  Most important of all, Hello restaurant's waiters are really nice and polite.
Likewise,  Star restaurant's waiters are great, too!  Owing to these outstanding conditions of restaurants,  I enjoy the atmosphere there very much when I have meals.

Comparing-2

There is a driver's license which is similar to another.  First of all, they are all women and both of their eye color is brown.  Futhermore, they have black hair color.  As to the height, Stephanie Brooks is as tall as Ann Friedman because they are all 5 feet and 3 inches.   Finally, the date of birth of these two women is July 31, 1981.  That is to say, they are at the same age.  I think it's amazing that they are similar to each other.  If they know this, they may be surprised!

Comparing-1

Compared to these two men, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson, the greatest persons in the U.S history.
First, both of them played an important role in American Revolution.  Second,  they delegated to the Continental Congress and studied or practiced law as well.  Next, Jonh Adams was a signer of Declaration of Independence and so was Thomas Jefferson.  Moreover, the date they died was the same-July 4,1826.
These two people are alike in many ways, perhaps there are something meaningful behind these coincidence.

Describing A Person-revised 1

My grandfather was missing yesterday morning when he went to the bathroom in a department store .  I had been waiting for him for two hours but he didn't come back. I have looked for him for entire day. He is too old to recognize the directions so if you see this man in a department store, please inform me as soon as possible.
The man whom I am looking for is called John who is always smiling. He is about 170 cm in height and 70 kg in weight or so.  Moreover, he has small eyes and wrinkles.  When he was seen last time, he wore a blue shirt and a pair of jeans. In addition, he is bold.  The most important of all, he has a big scar on his right cheek, which is easy for you to notice.  He is important for me so if you see him, please call me!  My phone number is 0977855622.  Thank you!

My Favorite Holiday

Christmas is my favorite hoilday and I have several reasons for why I like it.  To begin wuth, when Christmas is coming, many stores are decorated by many patterns which are associated with Christmas.  Next, there are many pleasant scenery such as Poinsettias and light bulbs along the street.  Third, my friends and I will write cards and give gifts to each other for celebrating Christmas.  But the main reason for me is that many kids believe the existance of Santa Claus so they put their socks beside their beds and wait for him.  I think it is really cute for kids to do so because after we grow up we no longer do this kind of thing.  As a result, I hope I still can keep this cute imagination even if I become an adult.

How to reduce stress -revised 1

Reducing stress is an important lesson to modern people. Every day, we meet different kinds of tough problems to make us feel stressed, so we have a variety of ways to reduce stress.  First of all, you should throw away the matter which bothers you.  Second, you may take a walk or take a deep breath to change your mood.  Moreover, you can write down all of  your complaints in your diary.  If these steps are not enough for you, you can yell in the bathroom or even hit your pillow!  Most important of all, after you feel better, you have to face the music instead of escaping the reality.

Describing A Person

My grandfather was missing in a department store yesterday morning when he went to the bathroom.  I had been waiting for him for two hours but he didn't come back. I have looked for him for almost one day. He is too old to recognize the directions so if you see this man in a department store, please inform me as soon as possible.
The man whom I am looking for is called John who is always smile with a big nose. He is about 170 cm and 70 kg or so.  Moreover, he has small eyes and wrinkles.  When he was missing, he wore a blue shirt and a pair of jeans. In addition, he is bold.  The most important of all, he has a big scar on his right cheek, which is easy for you to notice.  He is important for me so if you see him, please call me!  My phone number is 0977855622.  Thank you!

How to reduce stress

Reducing stress is an important lesson to modern people. Every day, we meet every kinds of tough problems to make us feel stressed, so we all have all manner of ways to reduce stress.  First of all, you should threw away the matter which bothers you.  Second, you may take a walk or take a deep breath to change your mood.  Moreover, you can write down all of  your complaints in your diary.  If these steps are not enough to you, you can yell in the bathroom or hit your pillow!  Most important of all, when you feel better, you have to face the music instead of escaping the reality.

Explaining a Process-3

If you want to go to the U.S Mint from Visitor Center, please follow the direstions.  First, go north for two blocks and turn left on Arch Street.  Next, go straight for two blocks and you will see the U.S Mint is on your right.

Explaining a Process-2

There's an  interesting experiment to show that black is a better collector of solar energy than white.  After starting the experiment, you have to prepare 2 tin cans, black and white paint and a room thermomrter.  First, paint the cans-one black and one white.  Second, fill the cans with water.  Third, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours.  Last but not least, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare.  After few minutes later, you can find that the temperature of the water in the black can is high.  By this experiment,  you can know the black is a better collector of  solar energy than white.

Explaining a Process-1

It is easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure.  To begin with, you have to cover bottom of pot with small stones.  Second, you can put two inches of soil on top of rocks.  Next, you should make a hole in center of soil.  After making a hole, you should drop plant into soil.  Then ,add soil until it almost reaches top of pot.  Before you water plant, you should press soil down with thumbs.  After having done all the steps, your plant will gradually grow up someday.

The Most Unforgettable memory-revised 1

Until now, I still can remember this frightening experience even if it happened in my childhood.  One day, I was playing computer games intently.  All of a sudden,  I saw a girl, who was like my sister, standing by the door.  I considered that she just played tricks on me so I didn't care about it.  Several hours later, I went downstairs to find my sister but I couldn't find her.  Afterward,  my mother told me that my sister had gone to the graduation travel for three days and that day was the second day.  After hearing it, I was so shocked that I couldn't say anything. 
  I have convinced myself that what I saw was an illusion so I haven't  told my mother anything about it.  I  regard it as the most unforgettable memory and keep it in my heart.

An Unforgettable Experience

  Until now, I still can remember this frightening experience even if it happened in my childhood.  One day, I was playing computer games intently.  All of a sudden,  I saw a girl, who was like my sister, standing by the door.  I considered that she just played tricks on me so I didn't care about it.  Several hours later, I went downstairs to find my sister but couldn't find her.  Afterward,  my mother told me that my sister went to the graduation travel for three days and today was the second day.  After hearing it, I was so shocked that I couldn't say anything. 
  I have convinced myself that what I saw was an illusion so I haven't  told my mother anything about it.  I want to regard it as the most unforgettable momery and keep it in my heart.

A dream I have had-revised 1

 I have had a dream that one of my cousins died.  In my dream, my cousin and I were on the top of a building, and I  persuaded her into jumping down the building because she told me that she was under the pressure.  I told her that she will be happier after jumping down.  She smiled happily at me and really did jump down the building. I saw she die but she still could move her head and looked at me madly.  She shouted at me and said," You told me that I would be happier than before!"
  After few days passed, my cousin who once appeared in my dream came to my home.  She smiled at me just like in the dream she did.  She said that she had dreamed that she died because of me.  I asked her why. She said because I told that she would be happier after jumping down the building.

A Dream I Have Had

   I have had a dream that one of my cousins died.  In my dream, my cousin and I were on the top of a building, and I  persuaded her into jumping down the building because she told me that she was under the pressure.  I told her that she will be more happier after she jumped.  She smiled happily at me and really did jump down the building. I saw she died but she could still move her head and looked at me madly.  She shouted at me and said," You told me that I would be happier than before!"
  After few days passed, my cousin who once appeared in my dream came to my home.  She smiled at me just like the dream she did.  She said that she dreamed that she died because of me.  I asked her why.
 She said because I told that she would be happier after she jumped down the building.